Group Workshops.
I work with you, using your screenplay, to show you the mistakes you’re making, and how to fix those mistakes. You learn while correcting your own screenplay.
Submissions & Formats.
Workshop attendees must submit the first five (5) pages of their screenplay and the Title page, two (2) weeks prior to the workshop date. I need time to review closely for maximum personal service to you.
I prefer screenplays written in Final Draft or Movie Magic Screenwriter, submitted electronically. I will accept, screenplays, written in MS word or PDF files, and Hard Copies.
Workshop Services and Pricing.
- 5-10 Students for 1 day (up to 7 hrs plus a 1 hr. lunch break)
- 15-20 Students for 2 days (up to 7 hours plus a 1 hr. lunch break)
- Day 1 - I will work with half of the class on their screenplays, while the other half observes.
- Day 2 - I will work with the other half of the class on their screenplays, while the first half observes.
- A guaranteed minimum of $250.00 plus travel, lodging, and meals.
- Fees: $50.00 per writer.
- Logistics: overhead projector
SYLLABUS.
Goal: Learn to write to Industry Standard, using your screenplay. It’s easy, fun and always eye-opening.
This hands-on course teaches screenwriters how to correct their individual mistakes, while learning the “DOs” and “DON’Ts” of writing a spec screenplay to suit today’s ultra-competitive market. Give your screenplay the chance it deserves, read by the people who can make a decision for you.
There are many classes out there, taught by extremely talented people, that tell you how to develop your story line, develop 3-D characters, write believable dialogue, and exciting action. Some even claim to help you write the next blockbuster. I make no such claims.
My method is to show, not tell. In a comfortable seminar environment, I work from your screenplay, point out your problems and show you how to fix them. That means thoroughly covering…
- Why writing to Industry Standard is so important
- Why, without it, your screenplay is doomed before it ever gets a chance to be read by the people who can push it up the line
- How to give your screenplay that professional look and read so necessary in today’s competitive market
The Schedule
The First Hour:
- Getting to know what Industry Standard means and why it is important to you and your story.
- Introduction
- Handouts
- Questions are encouraged immediately
The Rest of the Day:
Working from your screenplay, we show…
- Problem areas and how to fix them
- Answers to relevant questions (encouraged throughout the day)
TOPICS.
Tools of the Trade:
- Screenwriting Software - why you need screenwriting software, which software programs you should choose and why, etc.
- Books - Save the Cat, Screenplay, Writer's Journey, Story, etc.
Physical Structure:
The first step is making your screenplay look like a professional wrote it.
- Margins
- Font
- Spacing
- Page Numbers
- Mores & Continueds
- Title Page
- Covers
- Brads
What you can put on the page and why:
- How to write for the screen and not make amateur mistakes
- The screenplay industry is constantly being updated to fit today’s market
Typos and Omissions
- Why they kill your hopes and dreams, and your chance at success
- Camera Angles, POVs, Editing, etc.
- How to write the camera into the action without spelling it out
- When it’s okay to insert editing instructions
- How to use “The Shot”
Writing Visually:
- Show, don’t tell and how to do it
Narrative Paragraph Length, and Why
- How to write narrative that guides the reader’s eye
- Rule of thumb on paragraph length –- acceptable and not
Picking the Right Verbs
- Importance of choosing strong verbs
- Avoiding “to be” verbs
When to Use Upper case and When Not to Use Upper Case
How and When to Stack Action
Present Tense Always
Continuity and why it’s important
Learning to visualize your story, scene by scene and why